Thursday, March 22, 2012

Yes, [the Gamemakers] have to have a victor

I just finished The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins. First Lord of the Flies, then this. Who knew books that dealt with children killing children would be a theme for my reading this month.

Firstly, yes, I liked it. Yes, I will be reading the other books in the trilogy even though I heard they're not as good. Yes, yes, you were right internet. I was drawn in, I didn't want to put it down, I was annoyed at my commute for not being longer, which is stupid because no I don't want that. See that's what this book did. 

So here's the thing, I know there have been a thousand and one reviews of this book. And I'm sure the majority of those are better than what I would write. Instead I want to focus on where I felt cheated. Now I want to it be clear that these problems come after the fact that I still really liked the book. Also in order for me to talk about my issues, I need to bring up plot points so this will contain spoilers. If you haven't read it yet, go read it (it will take you a couple days, it's a quick read) then come back here and say "Why, yes! I completely agree! What was going on with that?" or "What are you talking about? You have no idea what you're saying". Whatever floats your boat.

Spoilers
My first problem is the love story that they sorta shoehorned in there. I know, people have said it makes more sense in the other books, but it doesn't make a lot of sense in this one. It feels like it was shoved in there last minute and it's hard to have a love triangle when one of the triangle points is only in the book for about 7 pages. The fashion stuff with Cinna also seemed sort of shoved in there. It bothered me less than the beginning of this love triangle, but there still seemed to be more time than made sense dedicated to describing clothes.

Those are small things compared to my major complaint. I felt cheated. We have a story that centers on this messed up government holding a fight to the death among a bunch of children. These are kids that didn't ask for this (I'll get to the Career Tributes in a minute) and are thrown into a literal kill-or-be-killed situation where one's survival is directly related to another's death. And all of this is for the entertainment of the people watching. This has the opportunity for serious moral dilemmas. Not only does it have the opportunity, it sort of requires it. But Katniss hardly killed anyone.

Now I don't mean this as a "I thirst for blood!" kind of way. I mean Katniss is thrown into a arena where her goal is to be the last one surviving and even in this situation she is hardly forced to kill. And the kills she does complete are simple. She never has to deal a difficult death. She (somewhat) indirectly causes the death of a couple unnamed tributes when she drops the tracker jacker nest on them. She shoots another unnamed tribute who had just killed her ally and friend and was about to kill her. She mercy kills Cato after he'd been mauled by the weird muttations*. But she is never in the position where she has to kill someone she cares about, like Rue or Peeta. Hell, she never even has to kill someone she admires, like Thresh or Foxface. Never. What the hell? Again, it's not that I wanted her to have to kill someone she cared for, but that is sort of the whole point of the Games and by having Katniss never have to face this it means we, the reader, never actually face up to what these Games mean. Collins may say it over and over, and have Katniss think about how awful it would be to have to kill Rue or Peeta but she never shows it. You never get the emotional impact from it. What if she had to kill Rue? How would she have dealt with that in the aftermath? Yes, it would have made the book very depressing. But you know what? If you don't want to write a depressing book, don't write a book that centers on a fight to the death among children. It was a cop out and robbed the story of what it could have been.

I also want to talk about the Career Tributes. I didn't have a problem with them and I get why they're portrayed the way they are, since you're seeing things from Katniss's point of view. But when I was thinking of this and about how the kids that are thrown into the Games against their will, there is obviously the argument that the Career Tributes do want to be there. They are blood-thirsty, deranged killers, and they are disgusting. Besides that, these are people from the wealthier districts, that never felt the hunger and pain that someone like Katniss has felt. You're supposed to dislike these kids. They band together to attack the weaker tributes, they hurt Peeta, they kill Rue, etc. But thinking of them as the enemies, almost as bad as the Capitol, is wrong. Every District has to send 2 kids to the games. The names are picked out of a hat but someone can volunteer to take a tribute's place. These Career Tributes train their whole lives for the Games. They volunteer to take the place of other people that are picked. Which means they are saving the lives of other people in their District. The families in these districts know who will be going to the Games. Their kids aren't in danger. The Careers will go. Fine, they're more ruthless than the others. And they're volunteering for something that no one should want to do. But it's not like the Districts can just not send someone, so these kids are sacrificing not only their lives (since the odds are good they won't make it) but also their childhoods, which they are going to spend training to kill other people. I hope the Career Tributes get a little credit in the other books because they have their own heartbreaking stories.

So what do you think? Did you like the love story? Am I wrong about the cheat? Would it have ruined the story if Katniss had to kill someone she cared about? Would that have made it unfit for a YA audience? What about the Career Tributes? 
Spoilers in there

*I cannot say muttations without laughing, which kind of messes up how scary these things are supposed to be.

Title quote from page 344

Collins, Suzanne. The Hunger Games. Scholastic, 2008.

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Interesting questions you bring up about the Career Tributes. I haven't seen anyone else ask those things before, and I'll have to keep them in mind when I reread the books. (Which, of course, I've got to do!)

As for the love story - it does make more sense in the next two books, and it reads as a central plot point rather than as something tossed in to make readers happy. These big moral questions are addressed more in the next two books, too. I loved the first of the series, maybe more than the other books, but the next two (especially the third) do a better job of digging into the reasons the Hunger Games are held, the mentality they promote, and power in all its forms.
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You raise some interesting points, Alley. I am with you on the love story that feels like it's thrown in, but it does play an important role in book two - at least so far. As far as the career tributes, I did look at them as the enemy while I was reading it but they are just another product of the Captiol so we really can't blame them.

Glad you liked the book! I'm hoping to see the movie over the weekend.
1 reply · active 677 weeks ago
I love Peeta in the books (he looks gross in the movie and I am unhappy about this), but yeah, the whole love triangle thing is a bit dumb.

I will say I liked the last one the best. For Reasons. Which I cannot reveal yet. But I understand people liking the first the most.
2 replies · active 676 weeks ago
I don't know... I kind of think the love story was kind of ok, but I did just mainly ignore it and was all like KATNISS I LOVE YOU so... yeah. I mean, I just wasn't that bothered either way about the love story but it didn't distract me from things that were much more important and better done.

Also, oooh! It would probably been a lot more interesting if Katniss had had to kill someone she cared for, BUT it's fairly important for the next two books that she didn't, so that's good thinking, but not so good in practice. Although obviously Collins could have just done things completely differently, but I like the last two books, so... yeah!

YAY FOR FINALLY READING THE HUNGER GAMES! :D
1 reply · active 677 weeks ago
The books get more politically complicated and layered as the series goes on, and it's so true that politics are only treated perfunctorily in this book. I just re-read Hunger Games a couple of days ago and it's really fresh in my mind. Like you, I'm not thrilled with the love triangle they're trying to introduce in this book. Like you, I'm highly intrigued by the Career Tributes and would love to see a third-person narrative of this series taking them more into account, since otherwise we only see the story via the Katniss filter.

Unlike you, I admire Katniss a great deal, more than just about any other leading lady from YA these days. She didn't seem overly angsty to me, but I'd say she's earned the right to a little angst because: Teenager. Also: awful situation.
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I found the Hunger Games to be a compelling read. That doesn't mean I liked it much. Death Race 2000 was a compelling movie.

The black and white treatment of morality and letting Kat get out scott-free (morally) was probably what bothered me the most as well. Beyond that, the first-person narrative completely took out any sense of overarching drama that might be in the book. "Oh no, Kat is hiding in a tree for the night! With 120 pages left, I wonder if she'll be okay!" "Oh look, the main character's new friend is going off on a solo mission. I bet she'll be fine!"

I also had very little patience for Kat or Peter as characters. Probably because of the love story. Kat is dense to the point of disbelief, and Pete is a pathetic doormat for the vast majority of the book. Gale seemed a lot more down-to-earth, but that might just be because he never had enough page time to get on my nerves.

I could keep going, but I should probably do something more productive rather than rant about YA Lit.
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I think if Katniss had to kill someone she cared about, it might not sit well with the YA audience.

You get to learn more about the politics, the districts the Careers came from and so much more in the later books. I think that's the problem sometimes with books that are constructed as a trilogy, they leave out stuff to deal with in later books, assuming the readers are going to keep going with the series.

I think the "romance" with Peeta is necessary to get him to eat the berries. Though she was oblivious, she's not all lovey, gaga, dumb girl like other YA heroines I won't mention here. I don't think the triangle was really necessary though. She and Gale couldn't just be friends?

I know most people like that first book better, but I think the second one is my favourite. I have a friend who feels the same. A lot of people also like Mockingjay the least and I disagree with that too. Don't expect not to like the other books as much as the first.

Also, I'm going to be mad if the movie sucks.
2 replies · active 676 weeks ago
I just read Hunger Games too, and had some similar questions. I hadn't thought as much about the deus ex machina-ness of her experience in the games, though. Good Point. I had larger problems with the nonsensical nature of the setting in general.

I did really dislike the romance, partially because it felt forced, and partially because I didn't think either boy was worthy of her attention. I loved that Katniss was all "whatever, I'll fake it for the cameras," though, and I'm so sad because I know that won't continue. I really wanted her to hold the line at "hey, we're still friends and I saved our lives, so don't whine about the fact that I played you."
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The love story was odd but I think it works. It really emphasizes how screwed up everything is. Here you have Katniss, whose daily struggles include worrying about where her family's next meal will come from while she's fighting to the death like a freaking gladiator, and she hasn't even finished puberty yet. Awfully precocious. Through most of those scenes I wanted to smack her because she was so obnoxiously naive, but overall I thought it worked. And it does make more sense later and in the long term.

I completely agree with you about the career tributes. They aren't given any depth and that's too bad but, at the same time, I think it makes sense. Katniss HAS to think of them as her enemies, or she'd never be able to do what has to be done. The novel is fully from her perspective and while she does form necessary alliances and does blame the capitol for all of this, she needs an enemy in the ring or she'd have been lost from the word go. Oh, and the movie might make you feel a bit better on this point. THAT'S ALL I'LL SAY.

Which brings me to your last point. I actually thought the series was completely brutal. The fact that somebody like Rue dies at all, no matter who does it, is astonishing. If Rue had been in Harry Potter, she probably would have flown away on a fairy or something and ended up marrying George Weasley. Yes, Katniss gets out of the hard kills, but I think that we see that she's capable of them, with the emphasis that she's not a Career. She's there to survive, not to destroy.

Man, I had a lot more to say than I thought I did. :] Glad you mostly liked it.
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I've complained about the "love triangle" thing too. And I can't REALLY talk about it because I don't want to spoil the other books for you, but the honeyman and I both agree that while Collins did an awesome job at writing these books, the part she did suck at was the romance aspect. She could have just left it out for the most part. Katniss's obliviousness in the first book is annoying to no end. Sure, she has to focus on other stuff, but come on.

Very good points about the Careers, btw. Sure they were jerks, but seeing them as the enemy is exactly what the Capital wants - mistrust and resentment among the districts so that they don't become allies and start a revolution.

Also, agreed with her not really having to kill anyone she would have felt some conflict about, but if it makes you feel better there's a lot more bloodshed in the next books :)

Man I want to go re-read these books now... OR I should go read Battle Royale (or at least re-watch the movie), which I swear is where Collins got her inspiration from.
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I read this book ages ago so it's quite hard for me to remember it in detail. I remember liking it but not loving it.

And I agree with you about the love story - it almost felt as though Collins had to shoehorn it in as 'all YA must have a love story'.

I never did get to the other two books.
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I read this a few weeks ago so that I could go see the movie (have to read the book first you know). I really didn't like the love triangle bit. Can I say something ridiculous like for me it was the only bit that didn't ring true? I was quite able (and willing) to be swept up by the rest of it- dresses included. As for the rest of it, during the reading I was aware that Katniss wasn't forced to do much killing. Still hiding out is a reasonable strategy in such an event and to let the dust settle. Yes I could feel, and notice, the writer manipulating me about Rue, but that was ok. Her death was still very sad, and I will admit to crying. Still, I did really enjoy it overall, even if I had a few quibbles, and I'm looking forward to seeing the movie this weekend.
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Katniss is actually confronted with the decision to kill Peeta and more than once. She just chooses not to kill him even if it means she gets killed. When she overhears/sees him with the careers she could have decided to track and kill him/them. She chooses to focus on surviving instead. At the end of the game, she is directly confronted with the decision to kill Peeta when the game makers revoke the new rule that two from the same district can win. She could have shot him right there and then. She'd no way of knowing that the makers would let them live if they refused. Again she refuses to kill him and chooses death instead. They plan to commit suicide. So, i have to disagree that Katniss is never confronted with the decision to kill someone she cares about. She just refuses to kill him.

I'm not sure i follow your thinking about the Career tributes either. lol. Granted they are brainwashed teens but i can't muster much sympathy or respect for them even if they save someone by volunteering. I can't help but be influenced by what I'm reading now - Hitler Youth, a YA nonfiction book. A great many of Hitler's Youth happily joined and volunteered for SS and Hitler's other sinister doings. They were ready to die for "a better Germany" no questions asked. I see the career tributes acting much the same way. They want to bring glory, honor, wealth and prestige to themselves and the Capitol and believed/convinced themselves that the other district tributes deserved to die in the games because those districts were weak and "rebellious."

As for the love triangle, I enjoyed it only because Katniss is so contrary. She doesn't like being cornered into a romance no matter what her feelings may be. I liked that about her.
1 reply · active 675 weeks ago
Just browsing your blog, and I think I'ma google reader it. I reviewed Hunger Games on my blog too, gave it a 5/10. The Giver, written for a younger audience, far superior, maybe a 7 or 8/10. The Road, a 10/10.

Anyway, cool blog.
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